I will post the draft script for first scene. The outline for
the rest of the story is already written but I intend to make
changes and might combine it with something else I've written
too.
Restoration of the Daleks
ACT 1, SCENE 1
(The Doctor wakes up in a new body lying on his back in a
hospital bed. He leans up from his pillow and opens his eyes.
A doctor is standing beside the bed.)
THE DOCTOR: Ugh... (groans and yawns)
Doctor: Good to see that you're awake Doctor.
THE DOCTOR: Awake? ... Where am I? ... Where is This?
Doctor: This is Gallifrey Doctor. Congratulations! You've
regenerated.
THE DOCTOR: Regenerated? (The Doctor looks at his hands and
then feels his face with them. He then pauses.) Gallifrey was
destroyed. (he exclaims) How can I be here?
(A Time Lord steps into view from the shadows, not noticed
before by the Doctor.)
Time Lord: You were rescued from the event horizon of a black
hole.
THE DOCTOR: Rescued? How, who by?
Time Lord: With the Time Scoop.
THE DOCTOR: That's Time Lord technology, and it's forbidden.
Time Lord: Not since the Last Great Time War.
THE DOCTOR: Where's Bill? What happened to Bill?
Time Lord: Bill, we don't know of any Bill.
THE DOCTOR: What? I was with Bill just now, ... I mean just a
few moments ago. Before I regenerated. Wait...
Doctor: There is no Bill. She only existed in your mind.
THE DOCTOR: How do you know Bill was a she?
Time Lord: Pronouns, pronouns, Doctor. Tut, tut, tut...
Doctor: The medics took a scan of your brain patterns and
analysed them. You've been suffering from inter-regenerational hallucinations. Everything you think happened around the time
you were mortally wounded by the Cybermen is all a false
psychological construct.
THE DOCTOR: No, that's not true. Bill was real.
Time Lord: No she was not. You made her up. You made a lot of
stuff up that hardly makes any sense. A planet sized dragon
hatching from a shell formed by the Terran moon. Cybermen
regenerating like Time Lords. The Timeless Child. The Flux.
Laws of nature based on cartoon logic. Historical figures
changing race. Bi-generation...
Doctor: You suffered considerable trauma. Only to be expected
from the huge gravitational gradient you experienced.
THE DOCTOR: So, none of my recent memories are either accurate
or even of real events at all?
Doctor: No they are not. None of them. They never occurred the
way you now remember. You know full well that Time Lords can't
regenerate into a different gender from the one they were
originally assigned at birth. What if they happened to be
pregnant at the time? What do you imagine would happen to the
foetus?
Time Lord: And to the Time Lord themselves.
THE DOCTOR: Yes, you've brought up a valid point. That's why
it's biologically forbidden to all Time Lords. So what really
happened to me then?
Time Lord: We're not quite sure. Maybe you can help us?
(the Doctor sits on the side of the bed facing his
interlocutors.)
THE DOCTOR: Why am I here?
Time Lord: We rescued you.
THE DOCTOR: Why?
Time Lord: We need you to go on a mission.
THE DOCTOR: Oh, no, no, no...
Time Lord: You've not even heard what it's about yet.
THE DOCTOR: I'm not going on any mission. No... No more
missions for me.
Time Lord: We could always return you back to where we found
you.
THE DOCTOR: Go on then.
(The Doctor steps out of bed on shaky legs and moves towards
the window, taking in the view of the Citadel. Looking outside
of his hospital room he reaches for the latch.)
Time Lord: If you're thinking of escaping by jumping through
that window I wouldn't try.
Doctor: You wouldn't survive the fall from this height.
THE DOCTOR: I've fallen from far greater heights in my past
and survived.
Time Lord: Think again Doctor. The last time you fell from a
great height you regenerated into a young blond man. First and
only time you've been blond.
THE DOCTOR: How do you know all of these things about my
history?
Time Lord: I absorbed your mind signature from the Matrix.
(A tall elegant women walks into the room.)
THE DOCTOR: You can't do that. Only the...
(The Doctor is interrupted by the woman.)
Woman: You're Excellency, you've been summoned by the High
Council.
THE DOCTOR: ...only the Lord High President of the High
Council of Gallifrey can do that...
Woman: Correct Doctor. (pause) Mister President, the high
council is waiting and becoming impatient.
(The President looks towards the Doctor)
Time Lord PRESIDENT: Doctor they're waiting for you too.
The True Doctor wrote:
I will post the draft script for first scene. The outline for
the rest of the story is already written but I intend to make
changes and might combine it with something else I've written
too.
Restoration of the Daleks
ACT 1, SCENE 1
(The Doctor wakes up in a new body lying on his back in a
hospital bed. He leans up from his pillow and opens his eyes.
A doctor is standing beside the bed.)
THE DOCTOR: Ugh... (groans and yawns)
Doctor: Good to see that you're awake Doctor.
THE DOCTOR: Awake? ... Where am I? ... Where is This?
Doctor: This is Gallifrey Doctor. Congratulations! You've
regenerated.
THE DOCTOR: Regenerated? (The Doctor looks at his hands and
then feels his face with them. He then pauses.) Gallifrey was
destroyed. (he exclaims) How can I be here?
(A Time Lord steps into view from the shadows, not noticed
before by the Doctor.)
Time Lord: You were rescued from the event horizon of a black
hole.
THE DOCTOR: Rescued? How, who by?
Time Lord: With the Time Scoop.
THE DOCTOR: That's Time Lord technology, and it's forbidden.
Time Lord: Not since the Last Great Time War.
THE DOCTOR: Where's Bill? What happened to Bill?
Time Lord: Bill, we don't know of any Bill.
THE DOCTOR: What? I was with Bill just now, ... I mean just a
few moments ago. Before I regenerated. Wait...
Doctor: There is no Bill. She only existed in your mind.
THE DOCTOR: How do you know Bill was a she?
Time Lord: Pronouns, pronouns, Doctor. Tut, tut, tut...
Doctor: The medics took a scan of your brain patterns and
analysed them. You've been suffering from inter-regenerational
hallucinations. Everything you think happened around the time
you were mortally wounded by the Cybermen is all a false
psychological construct.
THE DOCTOR: No, that's not true. Bill was real.
Time Lord: No she was not. You made her up. You made a lot of
stuff up that hardly makes any sense. A planet sized dragon
hatching from a shell formed by the Terran moon. Cybermen
regenerating like Time Lords. The Timeless Child. The Flux.
Laws of nature based on cartoon logic. Historical figures
changing race. Bi-generation...
Doctor: You suffered considerable trauma. Only to be expected
from the huge gravitational gradient you experienced.
THE DOCTOR: So, none of my recent memories are either accurate
or even of real events at all?
Doctor: No they are not. None of them. They never occurred the
way you now remember. You know full well that Time Lords can't
regenerate into a different gender from the one they were
originally assigned at birth. What if they happened to be
pregnant at the time? What do you imagine would happen to the
foetus?
Time Lord: And to the Time Lord themselves.
THE DOCTOR: Yes, you've brought up a valid point. That's why
it's biologically forbidden to all Time Lords. So what really
happened to me then?
Time Lord: We're not quite sure. Maybe you can help us?
(the Doctor sits on the side of the bed facing his
interlocutors.)
THE DOCTOR: Why am I here?
Time Lord: We rescued you.
THE DOCTOR: Why?
Time Lord: We need you to go on a mission.
THE DOCTOR: Oh, no, no, no...
Time Lord: You've not even heard what it's about yet.
THE DOCTOR: I'm not going on any mission. No... No more
missions for me.
Time Lord: We could always return you back to where we found
you.
THE DOCTOR: Go on then.
(The Doctor steps out of bed on shaky legs and moves towards
the window, taking in the view of the Citadel. Looking outside
of his hospital room he reaches for the latch.)
Time Lord: If you're thinking of escaping by jumping through
that window I wouldn't try.
Doctor: You wouldn't survive the fall from this height.
THE DOCTOR: I've fallen from far greater heights in my past
and survived.
Time Lord: Think again Doctor. The last time you fell from a
great height you regenerated into a young blond man. First and
only time you've been blond.
THE DOCTOR: How do you know all of these things about my
history?
Time Lord: I absorbed your mind signature from the Matrix.
(A tall elegant women walks into the room.)
THE DOCTOR: You can't do that. Only the...
(The Doctor is interrupted by the woman.)
Woman: You're Excellency, you've been summoned by the High
Council.
THE DOCTOR: ...only the Lord High President of the High
Council of Gallifrey can do that...
Woman: Correct Doctor. (pause) Mister President, the high
council is waiting and becoming impatient.
(The President looks towards the Doctor)
Time Lord PRESIDENT: Doctor they're waiting for you too.
Yeah, that's okay... a good start.
Get back to us when it's complete, I'd like to read the whole
thing when you finish it.
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