• Review: Get Strong at the Endgame

    From Robert Jasiek@21:1/5 to All on Wed Sep 12 14:54:58 2018
    Review: Get Strong at the Endgame

    General Specification

    * Title: Get Strong at the Endgame
    * Author: Richard Bozulich
    * Publisher: Kiseido
    * Edition: 1997 (first printing)
    * Language: English
    * Price: EUR 19.50
    * Contents: endgame
    * ISBN: 4-906574-57-2
    * Printing: good
    * Layout: intermediate
    * Editing: very weak
    * Pages: 198
    * Size: 146mm x 209mm
    * Diagrams per Page on Average: 6
    * Method of Teaching: examples
    * Read when EGF: 10k - 1k
    * Subjective Rank Improvement: --
    * Subjective Topic Coverage: --
    * Subjective Aims' Achievement: +

    Preface

    When I first read the book in 1997 as a 4d, it had no effect on my
    endgame skill, I suspected it to have quite a few mistakes but, at
    that time, my endgame calculations were too weak to be sure whether
    the mistakes were the book's or mine. Although people like to point
    out errata in books, so far the errata page on Sensei's Library for
    this book has mentioned only one significant mistake and a few typos.
    On David Carlton's book review webpage, Georg Snatzke (then 1d),
    suspected a lot of mistakes but has not been sure about his own
    understanding, either.

    To clarify whether the book contains just a few or a lot of mistakes,
    in 2018 I (now 5d) have read the book for the second time after having
    educated myself about endgame theory. Usually, I need at most one day
    to read a typical book for single digit kyus. However, I have spent
    two weeks on my second reading of this book. Half of the time, I have
    invested on a) solving every problem carefully versus b) understanding
    and verifying correctness of the short texts in the book.

    Overview

    This is a problem book with 291 problems and answers but essentially
    without theory. For that, we are referred to Ogawa's The Endgame and
    its variety of traditional endgame theory under territory scoring.

    The book has four chapters and a short appendix, which compares
    professional versus amateur endgame play in one particular game. The
    answers of chapter 1 appear late in the book. This gives the reader
    options of how to use the initial "test". He can consult the answers immediately, or read chapters 2 and 3 about tesujis and evaluation,
    then solve the problems of chapter 1 again before reading its
    solutions. If, however, the reader wants to use this as a measure of
    his improvement (as the author advertises), he would have to recall
    his first solution of the problems in chapter 1 and compare to his
    second solution.

    37 of the 42 problems of chapter 1 and the 28 problems of chapter 4
    are copied from Kano Yoshinori 9p's Yose Jiten (Endgame Dictionary). I
    have recognised, and solved within a second, quite a few of the
    problems of the chapter 2 about tesujis because their shapes appear in
    various classical problem collections or Ogawa's book. On the other
    hand, the selection of endgame tesujis (or sometimes ordinary moves
    behaving like tesujis) is representative. The problems in chapter 3
    about evaluation show standard shapes (such as late follow-ups of
    josekis), are compiled easily but useful and relevant training
    nevertheless.

    Typically, there are two diagrams for the answers of chapter 1
    (correct versus failure variation), three diagrams for the answers of
    chapter 2 (correct, failure, comparison to ordinary moves) and two
    diagrams for the answers of chapter 3 (Black versus White starts). The
    problems of chapter 4 must be solved for Black's or White's start so
    typically the answers show two diagrams per problem.

    Conceptually, the book is best assessed by perceiving two parts. Part
    I comprises chapters 1 + 2 and their answers, the problems of chapter
    3, and the problems and answer diagrams of chapter 4. Part II
    comprises the answers of chapter 3 and the answer texts of chapter 4.
    Part I trains reading, tesujis and endgame evaluation. Part II conveys
    the author's applied sequences and calculation of endgame evaluation.
    I do not know whether the answer text in chapter 4 originates from
    Kano or Bozulich.

    Part I

    We have small board (usually 11x11) positions during the late or very
    late endgame. Each problem combines a few local endgames and we must
    find a correct move order to achieve the best result. The reader must
    spot tesujis and apply tactical reading. Move values might guide or
    deceive him so this chapter is hardly about evaluation. For the
    intended single digit kyu reader, effort is required. A low dan player
    might classify the problems as easy to intermediate. A beginner of
    endgame skill may find some of the problems hard, given the task of
    finding optimal play.

    Chapter 4 continues chapter 1 but now we apply knowledge acquired
    during earlier chapters, must solve every problem twice (once for
    either starting player), the problems are of an intermediate
    (sometimes advanced) level, we are also asked to calculate move values
    and spend much time on solving. Even dans can find these problems
    interesting.

    A reader not having seen a tesuji in chapter 2 before must invest
    effort on some of the problems. However, recognising a familiar shape
    makes a solution very easy. Similarly, some readers profit little from
    the tactical reading exercises in the book if they have already
    acquired a reasonable basic reading skill - some other readers might significantly improve if this should be their first, or an early,
    relevant source for training tactical reading or tesujis.

    The problems of chapter 3 are good for training basic endgame
    calculation if the reader already knows some theory to apply it here
    and does not look at the answers. Circa half of the problems is easy
    and half is of intermediate calculation difficulty. Tactical reading
    or tesujis only play a minor role in this chapter.

    If the book only consisted of part I, my assessment would be: it is
    useful for single digit kyus to train their tactical reading, become
    aware of tesujis and train their basic endgame calculation. On the
    other hand, since the texts provide rather little information, one can
    as well read the diagrams of Asian endgame books possibly without
    understanding any text. This book offers little different because too
    many examples or shapes are copied from other sources.

    Even if we ignore part II, the typos permit an only intermediate
    assessment of the editing. The layout is also not a highlight. For
    example, repeating the same problem task 14 times in chapter 4 reduces
    it to a layout element.

    The answer diagrams in chapter 4 have the following three mistakes.
    Answer 271 Black starts: White 14 is a mistake resulting in Black's
    win by 1 point (not in a tie, as the book's typo suggests) and must be
    played at 17, threatening a wedge as a follow-up and achieving a tie.
    Even with the dame filled, White need not reinforce the lower left
    region. Answer 271 White starts: likewise, White 11 is a mistake;
    played at 14 improves the score by 1 point for White. (Furthermore,
    "White 1 is the most efficient move." is wrong because White 5 is more efficient and different places in the book teach such details of local efficiency relevant in other positions.) Answer 283 White starts:
    unlike the book suggests, the moves are not "straightforward". Black 4
    results in White's win by 3 points. Instead, Black 7 is correct and
    results in White's win by 1 point so is 2 points better.

    The book does not mention most alternative, correct variations, which
    are not just equal options. The book should have a few more pages
    showing relevant, important, difficult variations. Just one correct
    diagram for a starting player is not always enough.

    Part II

    For almost all of the easy problems in chapter 3, the answer diagrams
    and texts are correct. Otherwise, the best that can be said about part
    II is that the reader should simply ignore it. This presumes his
    awareness of this advice.

    Each of the answers in chapter 3 and the texts of the answers of
    chapter 4 contains many mistakes. Georg Snatzke nails it neatly when
    saying that there was a really big flaw in this book, bigger than in
    any other go book he knew, a lot of the solutions in the Bozulich-part
    of the book must be simply wrong, he could never trust the given
    answers, slowing him down and diminishing many of the positive aspects
    of the book. What are those mistakes?

    We might tolerate typos affecting values because by far most of the
    mistakes are more severe. We can also tolerate intentional rounding if
    a number with a fractional component is rounded to the nearest
    integer. However, there is also rounding to the wrong adjacent integer
    or rough rounding some 2 points off resulting from guessing or lazy calculations. While the reader is asked to calculate move values,
    sometimes the author only gives rough lower or upper bounds.

    In chapter 4, many move values are small so also many mistakes are
    small. When teaching endgame calculations, small mistakes (which are
    not intentional, correct rounding) must also be avoided so that the
    reader learns well.

    The author cannot decide how to assess a basic ko. He sometimes calls
    it a half point ko, assesses it as one third of a point (as one would
    do under modern endgame theory), states the difference 1 between Black
    or White winning the ko or estimates a ko as some unspecified
    fraction.

    The author could have eliminated circa two thirds of his mistakes in
    endgame evaluation by spending another 3 to 6 weeks on editing and proofreading. He would have found the trivial mistakes and those
    mistakes for which application of endgame theory approaches his limit
    of understanding at the time of writing the book.

    Such mistakes are especially important. For part of the easy or
    difficult value calculations, the author shows his scope of
    understanding. With more effort, he could have applied his knowledge
    and avoided many of those mistakes approaching his limit of
    understanding. It mainly affects two kinds of mistakes: calculation
    when a local endgame has not so easy follow-ups and the distinction of
    gote and sente. The former is a consequence of Ogawa's weak
    description of theory for follow-ups. The latter is a major problem of traditional endgame theory.

    A couple of mistakes lie beyond the author's understanding of endgame evaluation, reach his limits where his understanding is unsure and can
    easily result in mistakes, or hit the gaps of traditional endgame
    theory. For a responsible writing of the book, he should have studied
    endgame theory and practical application in professional games for,
    say, three additional months and thereby enabled himself to avoid most
    of the remaining mistakes related to calculation of follow-ups or gote
    / sente distinction.

    This would have restricted remaining mistakes to those beyond the
    scope of traditional endgame theory: reassessing local double sentes
    and their move values in view of their inexistence; distinguishing
    gote from sente when it is particularly difficult; continuing local
    sequences for too long when they must be interrupted by plays
    elsewhere; neglecting a careful study of gote versus sente options and
    so on. As a consequence of not knowing how to verify such aspects,
    additional mistakes sometimes occur as a side effect. For example, if
    gote and sente are confused, or a sequence is too long, wrong move
    values are calculated.

    There are also various other, infrequent kinds of mistakes, such as
    not knowing which option is correct and therefore taking the average
    of the results of two variations.

    Not everything that looks like a mistake is one. For one advanced kind
    of follow-up calculation, I have spent one hour on trying to
    understand the short text of a particular answer to find out the
    author's implicitly used method of calculation and verify its correct application. This addresses another major problem of the too short
    answer texts: a few numbers are mentioned, the reader has to decrypt
    the text to identify what those numbers express and then invest much
    effort in understanding how these numbers are combined in a
    calculation, provided the text does not contain any mistake.
    "Difference" is used informally when two diagrams are compared like
    pictures and we shall spot and count those black and white points that
    are different. When three diagrams are compared, interpretation is
    much more difficult and made even more difficult by ambiguous
    references: does the author mean the position before a sequence, after
    a sequence or (as in some other answers) after move 1 of the sequence
    shown? Next, the reader must understand whether to add or subtract,
    and which number from which other number. Decrypting the texts is an
    extra puzzle. The reader is supposed to already understand all
    incarnations of the theory fluently, even those parts hardly described
    anywhere before.

    In other words, what this book really lacks is an explanation of the
    underlying theory or at the very least a careful, step-by-step
    application during the calculations. It is not the sheer number of
    problems that can make one stronger but it would be: good explanations
    paving understanding of what numbers are being calculated, why, how
    they are combined when the calculations proceed and how to recognise
    methods of calculation for application to other examples. Instead, the
    author adds more confusion when restricting considered intersections
    (locales) without specifying them or when even changing them.

    When a problem asks how much move 1 is worth, the disappointing answer calculates the value of the move as part of its sequence. The author
    might not be aware that a move itself can have a different value. The
    book is more disappointing whenever it calculates a move value but the interesting, difficult part of calculation would be the verification
    of gote versus sente or successive versus interrupted local play.
    Calculating a double sente move value is often easy but the book does
    not offer the much more demanding calculation as gote or sente.

    I cannot recommend a book with so many, relevant mistakes and gaps in explanation and calculation. A reader trusting the author might even
    become weaker from applying wrong endgame evaluations in his own
    games. A beginner might learn at least calculation in easy examples,
    provided he can distinguish them from the intermediate problems of
    evaluation, whose answers should be ignored. The book requires a major correction the most urgently.



    Disclaimer: Robert Jasiek is a researcher in the endgame and other go
    theory, author of endgame books and other go books, and go teacher.

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