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    From General Zod@21:1/5 to All on Fri Nov 19 14:49:37 2021
    Moon Water Dance

    Negativity of the past
    taints my future.
    Implanted between
    the buttons.

    Oh, Fate
    bring me answers.
    To the questions
    I cannot bear to ask.

    Enchanted time
    sitting on a bank of sand.
    Aquatic energy flows
    millions of gallons moving.

    To my eyes
    from the night sky.
    I watch the Moon dance
    over Venus.

    -------------------
    Poem by General Zod

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  • From Pamela Brown@21:1/5 to genera...@gmail.com on Sat Nov 20 10:49:22 2021
    On Friday, November 19, 2021 at 4:49:38 PM UTC-6, genera...@gmail.com wrote:
    Moon Water Dance

    Negativity of the past
    taints my future.
    Implanted between
    the buttons.

    Oh, Fate
    bring me answers.
    To the questions
    I cannot bear to ask.

    Enchanted time
    sitting on a bank of sand.
    Aquatic energy flows
    millions of gallons moving.

    To my eyes
    from the night sky.
    I watch the Moon dance
    over Venus.

    -------------------
    Poem by General Zod
    <sigh>...

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  • From George J. Dance@21:1/5 to genera...@gmail.com on Sat Nov 20 13:18:02 2021
    On Friday, November 19, 2021 at 5:49:38 PM UTC-5, genera...@gmail.com wrote:
    Moon Water Dance

    Negativity of the past
    taints my future.
    Implanted between
    the buttons.

    Oh, Fate
    bring me answers.
    To the questions
    I cannot bear to ask.

    Enchanted time
    sitting on a bank of sand.
    Aquatic energy flows
    millions of gallons moving.

    To my eyes
    from the night sky.
    I watch the Moon dance
    over Venus.

    -------------------
    Poem by General Zod

    Heh! I was reminded of the time when Jim Senetto found a YouTube video called "Moon Water Dance" (or, more likely, NG found it for him), and posted a link on aapc claiming that you'd stolen the words -- then I listened to the piece and discovered it was
    an instrumental, with no words.

    It was a nice song, though; and I've always thought that, if you get in the position to make YouTube videos of your songs, you should use 30 seconds to a minute from the song as background, and speak the words over it.

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WQZq0ZIkFT8

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  • From Paul Vicious@21:1/5 to pamel...@gmail.com on Mon Nov 22 15:05:18 2021
    On Saturday, November 20, 2021 at 1:49:23 PM UTC-5, pamel...@gmail.com wrote:
    On Friday, November 19, 2021 at 4:49:38 PM UTC-6, genera...@gmail.com wrote:

    Moon Water Dance

    Negativity of the past
    taints my future.
    Implanted between
    the buttons.

    Oh, Fate
    bring me answers.
    To the questions
    I cannot bear to ask.

    Enchanted time
    sitting on a bank of sand.
    Aquatic energy flows
    millions of gallons moving.

    To my eyes
    from the night sky.
    I watch the Moon dance
    over Venus.

    -------------------
    Poem by General Zod
    <sigh>...

    That's good, I hope...?

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