Pendragon wrote in message news:a21a2bcb-47e8-4b75-a34b-2bc2294757bf@googlegroups.com...
Two or more self-contained images that create a new (mental) image when
juxtaposed to one another through editing is a montage
Yes, that was the effect I was going for.
Will Dockery wrote:
Pendragon wrote in message
news:a21a2bcb-47e8-4b75-a34b-2bc2294757bf@googlegroups.com...
Two or more self-contained images that create a new (mental) image when
juxtaposed to one another through editing is a montage
Yes, that was the effect I was going for.
And parlayed excellently I might add...
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Apple Montage
Sneaking around
with Cousin Jenny,
smoking menthol
beyond the sheds.
Late summer vacation 1973
in the backwoods of Tennessee.
To the right
behind the barn
were apple trees.
There were several
of those trees
and other trees
behind them
beyond a field
and behind them, other trees.
Later, I stood near
as a crowd
watched Pops and my Uncle
cooking apple butter;
stirring the brown gunk,
boiling in a huge black kettle.
I saw my father
secretly pass
a wine bottle
to my Uncle Clarence.
I went from
breathing cold mist
out back behind the barn,
to breathing
the hot misty steam.
The air smelled of apple fumes
and strong booze.
-Will Dockery
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ill Zod wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
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Apple Montage
Sneaking around
with Cousin Jenny,
smoking menthol
beyond the sheds.
Late summer vacation 1973
in the backwoods of Tennessee.
To the right
behind the barn
were apple trees.
There were several
of those trees
and other trees
behind them
beyond a field
and behind them, other trees.
Later, I stood near
as a crowd
watched Pops and my Uncle
cooking apple butter;
stirring the brown gunk,
boiling in a huge black kettle.
I saw my father
secretly pass
a wine bottle
to my Uncle Clarence.
I went from
breathing cold mist
out back behind the barn,
to breathing
the hot misty steam.
The air smelled of apple fumes
and strong booze.
-Will Dockery
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Thanks for the bump, Zod.
🙂
Will Dockery wrote:
Apple Montage
Sneaking around
with Cousin Jenny,
smoking menthol
beyond the sheds.
Late summer vacation 1973
in the backwoods of Tennessee.
To the right
behind the barn
were apple trees.
There were several
of those trees
and other trees
behind them
beyond a field
and behind them, other trees.
Later, I stood near
as a crowd
watched Pops and my Uncle
cooking apple butter;
stirring the brown gunk,
boiling in a huge black kettle.
I saw my father
secretly pass
a wine bottle
to my Uncle Clarence.
I went from
breathing cold mist
out back behind the barn,
to breathing
the hot misty steam.
The air smelled of apple fumes
and strong booze.
-Will Dockery
***************************************
Good afternoon to you
Apple Montage
Sneaking around
with Cousin Jenny,
smoking menthol
beyond the sheds.
Late summer vacation 1973
in the backwoods of Tennessee.
To the right
behind the barn
were apple trees.
There were several
of those trees
and other trees
behind them
beyond a field
and behind them, other trees.
Later, I stood near
as a crowd
watched Pops and my Uncle
cooking apple butter;
stirring the brown gunk,
boiling in a huge black kettle.
I saw my father
secretly pass
a wine bottle
to my Uncle Clarence.
I went from
breathing cold mist
out back behind the barn,
to breathing
the hot misty steam.
The air smelled of apple fumes
and strong booze.
-Will Dockery
Will Dockery wrote:
Pendragon wrote in message
news:a21a2bcb-47e8-4b75-a34b-2bc2294757bf@googlegroups.com...
Two or more self-contained images that create a new (mental) image when
juxtaposed to one another through editing is a montage
Yes, that was the effect I was going for.
And parlayed excellently I might add...
***********************************************
Apple Montage
Sneaking around
with Cousin Jenny,
smoking menthol
beyond the sheds.
Late summer vacation 1973
in the backwoods of Tennessee.
To the right
behind the barn
were apple trees.
There were several
of those trees
and other trees
behind them
beyond a field
and behind them, other trees.
Later, I stood near
as a crowd
watched Pops and my Uncle
cooking apple butter;
stirring the brown gunk,
boiling in a huge black kettle.
I saw my father
secretly pass
a wine bottle
to my Uncle Clarence.
I went from
breathing cold mist
out back behind the barn,
to breathing
the hot misty steam.
The air smelled of apple fumes
and strong booze.
-Will Dockery
***************************************
Will Dockery wrote:
Pendragon wrote in message
news:a21a2bcb-47e8-4b75-a34b-2bc2294757bf@googlegroups.com...
Two or more self-contained images that create a new (mental) image when
juxtaposed to one another through editing is a montage
Yes, that was the effect I was going for.
And parlayed excellently I might add...
***********************************************
Apple Montage
Sneaking around
with Cousin Jenny,
smoking menthol
beyond the sheds.
Late summer vacation 1973
in the backwoods of Tennessee.
To the right
behind the barn
were apple trees.
There were several
of those trees
and other trees
behind them
beyond a field
and behind them, other trees.
Later, I stood near
as a crowd
watched Pops and my Uncle
cooking apple butter;
stirring the brown gunk,
boiling in a huge black kettle.
I saw my father
secretly pass
a wine bottle
to my Uncle Clarence.
I went from
breathing cold mist
out back behind the barn,
to breathing
the hot misty steam.
The air smelled of apple fumes
and strong booze.
-Will Dockery
***************************************
Will Dockery wrote:
Pendragon wrote in message
news:a21a2bcb-47e8-4b75-a34b-2bc2294757bf@googlegroups.com...
Two or more self-contained images that create a new (mental) image when
juxtaposed to one another through editing is a montage
Yes, that was the effect I was going for.
And parlayed excellently I might add...
***********************************************
Apple Montage
Sneaking around
with Cousin Jenny,
smoking menthol
beyond the sheds.
Late summer vacation 1973
in the backwoods of Tennessee.
To the right
behind the barn
were apple trees.
There were several
of those trees
and other trees
behind them
beyond a field
and behind them, other trees.
Later, I stood near
as a crowd
watched Pops and my Uncle
cooking apple butter;
stirring the brown gunk,
boiling in a huge black kettle.
I saw my father
secretly pass
a wine bottle
to my Uncle Clarence.
I went from
breathing cold mist
out back behind the barn,
to breathing
the hot misty steam.
The air smelled of apple fumes
and strong booze.
-Will Dockery
********************************
Pendragon wrote in message news:a21a2bcb-47e8-4b75-a34b-2bc2294757bf@googlegroups.com...
Two or more self-contained images that create a new (mental) image when
juxtaposed to one another through editing is a montage
Yes, that was the effect I was going for.
Will Dockery wrote:
Pendragon wrote in message
news:a21a2bcb-47e8-4b75-a34b-2bc2294757bf@googlegroups.com...
Two or more self-contained images that create a new (mental) image when
juxtaposed to one another through editing is a montage
Yes, that was the effect I was going for.
Groovy effect man, I was affected...!
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