• Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues

    From W.Dockery@21:1/5 to General Zod on Mon May 30 15:40:14 2022
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    "General Zod" wrote in message
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    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Is this a re-write?

    Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

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  • From General-Zod@21:1/5 to Will Dockery on Wed Jun 1 20:06:25 2022
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    Will Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Is this a re-write?

    Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

    Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

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  • From W.Dockery@21:1/5 to General Zod on Thu Jun 2 11:26:53 2022
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    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Again, I remember that day like it was yesterday, but I suspect Saint George Street will be standing, looking the same, long after in gone from scene.

    https://www.instagram.com/p/CdzpTcRMgWF/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y=

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  • From General-Zod@21:1/5 to Will Dockery on Fri Jun 3 20:35:05 2022
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    Will Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Is this a re-write?

    Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

    Having second read, better than ever......

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  • From General-Zod@21:1/5 to W.Dockery on Sat Jun 4 15:55:56 2022
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    W.Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Again, I remember that day like it was yesterday, but I suspect Saint George Street will be standing, looking the same, long after in gone from scene.

    https://www.instagram.com/p/CdzpTcRMgWF/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y=


    Cool visual data....

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  • From W.Dockery@21:1/5 to General-Zod on Tue Jun 7 00:49:05 2022
    XPost: alt.arts.poetry.comments

    General-Zod wrote:

    W.Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Again, I remember that day like it was yesterday, but I suspect Saint George Street will be standing, looking the same, long after in gone from scene.

    https://www.instagram.com/p/CdzpTcRMgWF/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y=


    Cool visual data....


    That was a fun night.

    🙂

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  • From W-Dockery@21:1/5 to General-Zod on Wed Jun 8 15:17:24 2022
    XPost: alt.arts.poetry.comments

    General-Zod wrote:

    Will Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Is this a re-write?

    Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

    Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

    I agree that I was nailing it goes n that era.

    🙂

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  • From W-Dockery@21:1/5 to General-Zod on Sun Jun 12 01:06:43 2022
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    General-Zod wrote:

    W.Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Again, I remember that day like it was yesterday, but I suspect Saint George Street will be standing, looking the same, long after in gone from scene.

    https://www.instagram.com/p/CdzpTcRMgWF/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y=


    Cool visual data....


    Thanks again for the nod, Zod.

    🙂

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  • From W-Dockery@21:1/5 to General-Zod on Mon Jun 13 07:10:28 2022
    XPost: alt.arts.poetry.comments

    General-Zod wrote:

    Will Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Is this a re-write?

    Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

    Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

    Good morning my friend and thanks again for the positive feedback.

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  • From W.Dockery@21:1/5 to General-Zod on Sun Jun 19 14:44:36 2022
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    General-Zod wrote:

    Will Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Is this a re-write?

    Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

    Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

    Good morning my friend, and thanks for the positive feedback.

    🙂

    --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05
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  • From W.Dockery@21:1/5 to General-Zod on Fri Jun 24 06:02:20 2022
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    General-Zod wrote:

    W.Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Again, I remember that day like it was yesterday, but I suspect Saint George Street will be standing, looking the same, long after in gone from scene.

    https://www.instagram.com/p/CdzpTcRMgWF/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y=


    Cool visual data....

    Good morning, and thanks again for reading and commenting.

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  • From W-Dockery@21:1/5 to General-Zod on Sun Jul 31 01:48:06 2022
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    General-Zod wrote:

    Will Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Is this a re-write?

    Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

    Another of your greatest poems, Doc....


    Good evening, Zod, and thanks again for the endorsement.

    🙂

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  • From W-Dockery@21:1/5 to General Zod on Tue Aug 9 09:22:11 2022
    XPost: alt.arts.poetry.comments

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery



    Another of your greatest poems, Doc....


    Thanks again for the nod, General Zod.

    🙂

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  • From General-Zod@21:1/5 to Will Dockery on Fri Aug 12 21:11:38 2022
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    Will Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Is this a re-write?

    Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

    I thank you for writing all these great poems...!

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  • From W.Dockery@21:1/5 to General-Zod on Sun Aug 14 16:20:36 2022
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    General-Zod wrote:

    Will Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Is this a re-write?

    Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

    Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

    Good afternoon, thanks again.

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  • From General-Zod@21:1/5 to Will Dockery on Tue Aug 16 20:11:45 2022
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    Will Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Is this a re-write?

    Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

    As said, one of your best....

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  • From W-Dockery@21:1/5 to General Zod on Thu Aug 18 03:24:14 2022
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    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery



    As said, one of your best....


    Thanks again, my friend.

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  • From W.Dockery@21:1/5 to General-Zod on Sat Aug 27 02:52:22 2022
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    General-Zod wrote:

    Will Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Is this a re-write?

    Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

    Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

    Thanks again my friend.

    --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05
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  • From W-Dockery@21:1/5 to General-Zod on Mon Sep 5 06:11:24 2022
    XPost: alt.arts.poetry.comments

    General-Zod wrote:

    Will Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Is this a re-write?

    Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

    Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

    Good morning, thanks again.

    🙂

    --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05
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  • From W-Dockery@21:1/5 to General-Zod on Sat Sep 10 00:23:54 2022
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    General-Zod wrote:

    Will Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Is this a re-write?

    Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

    Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

    Another poem Jim Senetto might enjoy.

    🙂

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  • From W-Dockery@21:1/5 to General-Zod on Sun Sep 11 23:48:07 2022
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    General-Zod wrote:

    Will Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Is this a re-write?

    Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

    Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

    Thanks again my friend.

    --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05
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  • From W.Dockery@21:1/5 to General-Zod on Wed Sep 14 11:30:48 2022
    XPost: alt.arts.poetry.comments

    General-Zod wrote:

    Will Dockery wrote:

    "General Zod" wrote in message
    news:7c12952a-069c-4230-ab69-c977bd838028@googlegroups.com...
    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Is this a re-write?

    Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

    Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

    As another day dawns, I tend to agree.

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  • From W.Dockery@21:1/5 to General-Zod on Fri Sep 16 20:15:01 2022
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    General-Zod wrote:

    Will Dockery wrote:

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    Will Dockery™ wrote:

    Chorus Six

    Dollars in the bucket
    collect for the street singer.
    Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
    points out the parrots.

    Blonde after blonde after blonde
    after the parade.
    People start looking really strange again.

    I must seem likewise to them
    as this dusty smell surrounds me.
    I'd draw these people with words
    but I'm not fast enough.

    They pass and fade
    part of the parade.

    On this really old wall
    good view from up here.
    Forever is a long time
    but not as long as yesterday.

    -Will Dockery

    Is this a re-write?

    Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for reading and commenting, my friend.

    Another of your greatest poems, Doc....


    Good afternoon, thanks again.

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