• Re: Hazel's Hex / Will Dockery

    From W-Dockery@21:1/5 to All on Mon May 30 13:45:41 2022
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    Hazel's Hex

    She holds her hand
    against the glass.
    Before she gets
    too much memory.
    This game of numbers
    chances so high to lose.

    I hesitate
    to call her name.
    Deep humid night
    sick wildflower smell.
    Watch her knocking
    across the Village Green
    I feel a sinking inside.

    Looked into her eyes
    like a night move to hold her.
    But that's not possible.
    Frayed pitch
    I must have thought I'd tried
    but I stopped way short.

    Her beauty is eternal
    being weary and so wary.
    Reconstruct my heart.
    Or something like
    revisionist memory
    since it was nothing
    but scrambled dogs and
    chitter-chat.

    -Will Dockery

    More of my life transformed into poetry/art.

    (From the archives)

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  • From Victor H.@21:1/5 to Will Dockery on Mon Jun 13 20:34:34 2022
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    Will Dockery wrote:

    Hazel's Hex

    She holds her hand
    against the glass.
    Before she gets
    too much memory.
    This game of numbers
    chances so high to lose.

    I hesitate
    to call her name.
    Deep humid night
    sick wildflower smell.
    Watch her knocking
    across the Village Green
    I feel a sinking inside.

    Looked into her eyes
    like a night move to hold her.
    But that's not possible.
    Frayed pitch
    I must have thought I'd tried
    but I stopped way short.

    Her beauty is eternal
    being weary and so wary.
    Reconstruct my heart.
    Or something like
    revisionist memory
    since it was nothing
    but scrambled dogs and
    chitter-chat.

    -Will Dockery

    More of my life transformed into poetry/art.

    (From the archives)

    Quite good and somewhat obscure to me....

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  • From W-Dockery@21:1/5 to Victor H. on Wed Jun 15 06:59:34 2022
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    Victor H. wrote:

    Will Dockery wrote:

    Hazel's Hex

    She holds her hand
    against the glass.
    Before she gets
    too much memory.
    This game of numbers
    chances so high to lose.

    I hesitate
    to call her name.
    Deep humid night
    sick wildflower smell.
    Watch her knocking
    across the Village Green
    I feel a sinking inside.

    Looked into her eyes
    like a night move to hold her.
    But that's not possible.
    Frayed pitch
    I must have thought I'd tried
    but I stopped way short.

    Her beauty is eternal
    being weary and so wary.
    Reconstruct my heart.
    Or something like
    revisionist memory
    since it was nothing
    but scrambled dogs and
    chitter-chat.

    -Will Dockery

    More of my life transformed into poetry/art.

    (From the archives)

    Quite good and somewhat obscure to me....

    It'll go on the blog tomorrow.

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  • From Victor H.@21:1/5 to Will Dockery on Fri Oct 7 19:14:31 2022
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    Will Dockery wrote:

    Hazel's Hex

    She holds her hand
    against the glass.
    Before she gets
    too much memory.
    This game of numbers
    chances so high to lose.

    I hesitate
    to call her name.
    Deep humid night
    sick wildflower smell.
    Watch her knocking
    across the Village Green
    I feel a sinking inside.

    Looked into her eyes
    like a night move to hold her.
    But that's not possible.
    Frayed pitch
    I must have thought I'd tried
    but I stopped way short.

    Her beauty is eternal
    being weary and so wary.
    Reconstruct my heart.
    Or something like
    revisionist memory
    since it was nothing
    but scrambled dogs and
    chitter-chat.

    -Will Dockery

    More of my life transformed into poetry/art.

    Found in my Drafts file...

    :)

    Simply outstanding poetry.....

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  • From W.Dockery@21:1/5 to Zod on Sun Oct 9 18:49:00 2022
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    Zod wrote:
    Will Dockery wrote:

    Hazel's Hex

    She holds her hand
    against the glass.
    Before she gets
    too much memory.
    This game of numbers
    chances so high to lose.

    I hesitate
    to call her name.
    Deep humid night
    sick wildflower smell.
    Watch her knocking
    across the Village Green
    I feel a sinking inside.

    Looked into her eyes
    like a night move to hold her.
    But that's not possible.
    Frayed pitch
    I must have thought I'd tried
    but I stopped way short.

    Her beauty is eternal
    being weary and so wary.
    Reconstruct my heart.
    Or something like
    revisionist memory
    since it was nothing
    but scrambled dogs and
    chitter-chat.

    -Will Dockery

    More of my life transformed into poetry/art.

    Found in my Drafts file...

    :)

    Simply outstanding poetry.....

    Thanks again for reading and commenting, Zod.

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