Will Dockery wrote:
How many times
Are you going to xxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Again, more of my poetry based on my life, filtered through memory and dream... transformed into Art.
Those who understand, will.
=========================================
Will Dockery wrote:
I'm on Eternal-September tonight, checking of the broken thread phenomenon >> again, so, another test post on this on to see if it will stay on thread or >> break the thread...
Test, test...
Appears to be a broken thread.
Will Dockery wrote:
It's painfully obvious that your poem was "inspired," at least in part,
from "Suzanne Takes You Down." In fact, I'd venture to guess that the
vast majority of your poems are derived from rock or folkie songs (like
that "Hotel California" clone)
Which you were also mistaken about, and I explained to you nearly endlessly.
I'm just not well-versed enough in late 60s/early 70s music to pick up on
them all.
Seriously, nothing like that is there, although I do love Leonard Cohen's poetry, this is working in a very different area than "Suzanne"... ask somebody who would actually know, like George Dance.
https://youtu.be/st3dbWFKpB8
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe.
Again, I love the Leonard Cohen poetry, but this poem is operating on a
whole other level, one personal to me and my world, as is "Esquiline Hill" unique to me and the setting for my poetry, Shadowville.
So, Ping: George Dance.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Michael Pendragon wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
It's painfully obvious that your poem was "inspired," at least in part,
from "Suzanne Takes You Down." In fact, I'd venture to guess that the
vast majority of your poems are derived from rock or folkie songs (like
that "Hotel California" clone)
Which you were also mistaken about, and I explained to you nearly endlessly.
I'm just not well-versed enough in late 60s/early 70s music to pick up on >>> them all.
Seriously, nothing like that is there, although I do love Leonard Cohen's
poetry, this is working in a very different area than "Suzanne"... ask
somebody who would actually know, like George Dance.
https://youtu.be/st3dbWFKpB8
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe.
Again, I love the Leonard Cohen poetry, but this poem is operating on a
whole other level, one personal to me and my world, as is "Esquiline Hill" >> unique to me and the setting for my poetry, Shadowville.
So, Ping: George Dance.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
An earlier discussion where Michael Pendragon showed his cluelessness about Leonard Cohen once again.
🙂
Trace wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
I'm on Eternal-September tonight, checking of the broken thread phenomenon >>> again, so, another test post on this on to see if it will stay on thread or >>> break the thread...
Test, test...
Appears to be a broken thread.
Yes, checking in to see if it repaired itself by now.
Yes, checking in to see if it repaired itself by now.
W.Dockery wrote:
Michael Pendragon wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
It's painfully obvious that your poem was "inspired," at least in part, >>>> from "Suzanne Takes You Down." In fact, I'd venture to guess that the >>>> vast majority of your poems are derived from rock or folkie songs (like >>>> that "Hotel California" clone)
Which you were also mistaken about, and I explained to you nearly endlessly.
I'm just not well-versed enough in late 60s/early 70s music to pick up on >>>> them all.
Seriously, nothing like that is there, although I do love Leonard Cohen's >>> poetry, this is working in a very different area than "Suzanne"... ask
somebody who would actually know, like George Dance.
https://youtu.be/st3dbWFKpB8
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe.
Again, I love the Leonard Cohen poetry, but this poem is operating on a
whole other level, one personal to me and my world, as is "Esquiline Hill" >>> unique to me and the setting for my poetry, Shadowville.
So, Ping: George Dance.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
An earlier discussion where Michael Pendragon showed his cluelessness about Leonard Cohen once again.
🙂
Voodoo Boy is a grade A dummy...
Will Dockery wrote:
Yes, checking in to see if it repaired itself by now.
Add this...
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st3dbWFKpB8
***
news:b1067c4a-a1cc-49da-8cf8-64cb5d2f3241@googlegroups.com...
In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sun, 28 Jul 2019 17:57:56 -0700 (PDT), Will >> Dockery wrote:
On Sunday, July 28, 2019 at 7:55:19 PM UTC-4, Peter J Ross wrote:
In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sun, 28 Jul 2019 16:45:34 -0700
(PDT),
Will Dockery wrote:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zrr5LmC2p1A
I remember Nick Lowe well... good song.
googled "Nick Lowe" and is now trying to be
as cool as the Jesus of Cool.
But Nick Lowe
No, Nick Lowe had a hit on American radio around 1979, so most music >> > > > lovers here of that age are familiar with him, not to mention his
Elvis Costello and Carter Family connections.
And, I think we've discussed Nick Lowe here before, Peter.
I've discussed Nick Lowe here before
Yes, that's correct... the rest of your sentence was snipped for being
false information.
;)
No reason to repeat PJR's lies....
Shut up, Todd.
=========================================================
"Peter J Ross" wrote in message news:slrnqken5d.gq9.peadar.ruadh@id-313441.user.individual.net...
PJR :-)
How often are you going to spam this identical spew
As soon as your spam counts as cancellable I'll report it to Google.
--
============================================================
"Michael Pendragon" wrote in message
news:b1067c4a-a1cc-49da-8cf8-64cb5d2f3241@googlegroups.com...
In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sun, 28 Jul 2019 17:57:56 -0700 (PDT), Will >>> Dockery wrote:
On Sunday, July 28, 2019 at 7:55:19 PM UTC-4, Peter J Ross wrote:
In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sun, 28 Jul 2019 16:45:34 -0700
(PDT),
Will Dockery wrote:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zrr5LmC2p1A
I remember Nick Lowe well... good song.
googled "Nick Lowe" and is now trying to be
as cool as the Jesus of Cool.
But Nick Lowe
No, Nick Lowe had a hit on American radio around 1979, so most music >>> > > > lovers here of that age are familiar with him, not to mention his
Elvis Costello and Carter Family connections.
And, I think we've discussed Nick Lowe here before, Peter.
I've discussed Nick Lowe here before
Yes, that's correct... the rest of your sentence was snipped for being >>> > false information.
;)
No reason to repeat PJR's lies....
Shut up, Todd.
=========================================================
"Peter J Ross" wrote in message
news:slrnqken5d.gq9.peadar.ruadh@id-313441.user.individual.net...
PJR :-)
How often are you going to spam this identical spew
As soon as your spam counts as cancellable I'll report it to Google.
--
============================================================
Whatever happened to "Peter J Ross"?
:)
In alt.arts.poetry.comments Will Dockery wrote:
On Sunday, July 28, 2019 at 7:55:19 PM UTC-4, Peter J Ross wrote:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zrr5LmC2p1A
I remember Nick Lowe well... good song.
Will Dockery wrote:
"Michael Pendragon" wrote in message
news:b1067c4a-a1cc-49da-8cf8-64cb5d2f3241@googlegroups.com...
In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sun, 28 Jul 2019 17:57:56 -0700 (PDT), Will >>>> Dockery wrote:
On Sunday, July 28, 2019 at 7:55:19 PM UTC-4, Peter J Ross wrote: >>>> > > >> In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sun, 28 Jul 2019 16:45:34 -0700
(PDT),
Will Dockery wrote:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zrr5LmC2p1A
I remember Nick Lowe well... good song.
googled "Nick Lowe" and is now trying to be
as cool as the Jesus of Cool.
But Nick Lowe
No, Nick Lowe had a hit on American radio around 1979, so most music >>>> > > > lovers here of that age are familiar with him, not to mention his >>>> > > > Elvis Costello and Carter Family connections.
And, I think we've discussed Nick Lowe here before, Peter.
I've discussed Nick Lowe here before
Yes, that's correct... the rest of your sentence was snipped for being >>>> > false information.
;)
No reason to repeat PJR's lies....
Shut up, Todd.
=========================================================
"Peter J Ross" wrote in message
news:slrnqken5d.gq9.peadar.ruadh@id-313441.user.individual.net...
PJR :-)
How often are you going to spam this identical spew
As soon as your spam counts as cancellable I'll report it to Google.
--
============================================================
Whatever happened to "Peter J Ross"?
:)
He retired...?
W.Dockery wrote:
"Michael Pendragon" wrote in message
news:b1067c4a-a1cc-49da-8cf8-64cb5d2f3241@googlegroups.com...
In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sun, 28 Jul 2019 17:57:56 -0700 (PDT), Will >>>> Dockery wrote:
On Sunday, July 28, 2019 at 7:55:19 PM UTC-4, Peter J Ross wrote: >>>> > > >> In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sun, 28 Jul 2019 16:45:34 -0700
(PDT),
Will Dockery wrote:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zrr5LmC2p1A
I remember Nick Lowe well... good song.
googled "Nick Lowe" and is now trying to be
as cool as the Jesus of Cool.
But Nick Lowe
No, Nick Lowe had a hit on American radio around 1979, so most music >>>> > > > lovers here of that age are familiar with him, not to mention his >>>> > > > Elvis Costello and Carter Family connections.
And, I think we've discussed Nick Lowe here before, Peter.
I've discussed Nick Lowe here before
Yes, that's correct... the rest of your sentence was snipped for being >>>> > false information.
;)
No reason to repeat PJR's lies....
Shut up, Todd.
=========================================================
"Peter J Ross" wrote in message
news:slrnqken5d.gq9.peadar.ruadh@id-313441.user.individual.net...
PJR :-)
How often are you going to spam this identical spew
As soon as your spam counts as cancellable I'll report it to Google.
--
============================================================
Whatever happened to "Peter J Ross"?
:)
He retired...?
General-Zod wrote:
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st3dbWFKpB8
***
Thanks, Zod.
W.Dockery wrote:
Michael Pendragon wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
It's painfully obvious that your poem was "inspired," at least in part, >>>> from "Suzanne Takes You Down." In fact, I'd venture to guess that the >>>> vast majority of your poems are derived from rock or folkie songs (like >>>> that "Hotel California" clone)
Which you were also mistaken about, and I explained to you nearly endlessly.
I'm just not well-versed enough in late 60s/early 70s music to pick up on >>>> them all.
Seriously, nothing like that is there, although I do love Leonard Cohen's >>> poetry, this is working in a very different area than "Suzanne"... ask
somebody who would actually know, like George Dance.
https://youtu.be/st3dbWFKpB8
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe.
Again, I love the Leonard Cohen poetry, but this poem is operating on a
whole other level, one personal to me and my world, as is "Esquiline Hill" >>> unique to me and the setting for my poetry, Shadowville.
So, Ping: George Dance.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
An earlier discussion where Michael Pendragon showed his cluelessness about Leonard Cohen once again.
Voodoo Boy is a grade A dummy...
Again, more of my poetry based on my life, filtered through memory and
dream... transformed into Art.
Those who understand, will.
https://youtu.be/st3dbWFKpB8
=========================================
Testing for possible broken link.
Will Dockery wrote:
Again, more of my poetry based on my life, filtered through memory and
dream... transformed into Art.
Those who understand, will.
https://youtu.be/st3dbWFKpB8
=========================================
Testing for possible broken link.
Seems back on track for now.....!
Will Dockery wrote:
General-Zod wrote:
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st3dbWFKpB8
***
Thanks, Zod.
Good day to you kind sir.....
Again, more of my poetry based on my life, filtered through memory and dream... transformed into Art.
Those who understand, will... those who do not, are not my problem.
----------------------------------------------------------
More notations in my Drafts file.
Will Dockery wrote:
Will Dockery - Angel Of Esquiline Hill [first draft]:
https://soundcloud.com/jacksnipe05/willdockeryangelofesquilinehillfirstdraft
"Words and Music by Will Dockery, Robert Wright and Jack Snipe. First draft; lead guitar and bck vocals need a little tweaking; otherwise I think I've done a pretty decent job on the production." -Jack Snipe
Again, more of my poetry based on my life, filtered through memory and
dream... transformed into Art.
Those who understand, will... those who do not, are not my problem.
Most seem to get it, Doc....
----------------------------------------------------------
More notations in my Drafts file.
General-Zod wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
Will Dockery - Angel Of Esquiline Hill [first draft]:
https://soundcloud.com/jacksnipe05/willdockeryangelofesquilinehillfirstdraft
"Words and Music by Will Dockery, Robert Wright and Jack Snipe. First draft; lead guitar and bck vocals need a little tweaking; otherwise I think I've done a pretty decent job on the production." -Jack Snipe
Again, more of my poetry based on my life, filtered through memory and
dream... transformed into Art.
Those who understand, will... those who do not, are not my problem.
Most seem to get it, Doc....
Those who matter, at least.
Dink wrote in message news:92f4d4b2-9c89-4a25-8c33-e9879e5d4f52@googlegroups.com...
On Thursday, December 17, 2015 at 6:47:10 AM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote:
"It'll take you eternities to get rid of me,' she adds sadly, which makes
me
jealous, I want her to say I'll never get rid of her - I want to be chased >> till eternity till I catch her." -Jack Kerouac
Check out download of the day (& for John Allen Daniel II, Brian Mallard,
Jack Snipe & Deby Love-Payne to study for the upcoming show Dec. 19th),
"Angel of Esquiline Hill / Will Dockery & The Shadowville All-Stars
https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery/song/22149226-angel-esquiline-hill--will-dockery?0
:D
nobody wants
Yet here you were, whining away.
;)
Will Dockery wrote:
Will Dockery - Angel Of Esquiline Hill [first draft]:
https://soundcloud.com/jacksnipe05/willdockeryangelofesquilinehillfirstdraft
"Words and Music by Will Dockery, Robert Wright and Jack Snipe. First draft; lead guitar and bck vocals need a little tweaking; otherwise I think I've done a pretty decent job on the production." -Jack Snipe
Again, more of my poetry based on my life, filtered through memory and
dream... transformed into Art.
Those who understand, will... those who do not, are not my problem.
Most seem to get it, Doc....
----------------------------------------------------------
More notations in my Drafts file.
Will Dockery wrote in
news:92f4d4b2-9c89-4a25-8c33-e9879e5d4f52@googlegroups.com...
"It'll take you eternities to get rid of me,' she adds sadly, which makes >>> me
jealous, I want her to say I'll never get rid of her - I want to be chased >>> till eternity till I catch her." -Jack Kerouac
Excellent Kerouac quote ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Check out download of the day (& for John Allen Daniel II, Brian Mallard, >>> Jack Snipe & Deby Love-Payne to study for the upcoming show Dec. 19th),
"Angel of Esquiline Hill / Will Dockery & The Shadowville All-Stars
Zod wrote:
Will Dockery wrote in
news:92f4d4b2-9c89-4a25-8c33-e9879e5d4f52@googlegroups.com...
"It'll take you eternities to get rid of me,' she adds sadly, which makes >>>> me
jealous, I want her to say I'll never get rid of her - I want to be chased >>>> till eternity till I catch her." -Jack Kerouac
Excellent Kerouac quote ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Agreed.
Check out download of the day (& for John Allen Daniel II, Brian Mallard, >>>> Jack Snipe & Deby Love-Payne to study for the upcoming show Dec. 19th), >>>> "Angel of Esquiline Hill / Will Dockery & The Shadowville All-Stars
https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery/song/22149226-angel-esquiline-hill--will-dockery?0
***
Will Dockery wrote:
Zod wrote:
Will Dockery wrote in
news:92f4d4b2-9c89-4a25-8c33-e9879e5d4f52@googlegroups.com...
"It'll take you eternities to get rid of me,' she adds sadly, which makes >>>>> me
jealous, I want her to say I'll never get rid of her - I want to be chased
till eternity till I catch her." -Jack Kerouac
Excellent Kerouac quote ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Agreed.
Check out download of the day (& for John Allen Daniel II, Brian Mallard, >>>>> Jack Snipe & Deby Love-Payne to study for the upcoming show Dec. 19th), >>>>> "Angel of Esquiline Hill / Will Dockery & The Shadowville All-Stars
https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery/song/22149226-angel-esquiline-hill--will-dockery?0
***
It would make a great quote of the day....
Will Dockery wrote:
Dink wrote in message
news:92f4d4b2-9c89-4a25-8c33-e9879e5d4f52@googlegroups.com...
On Thursday, December 17, 2015 at 6:47:10 AM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote:
"It'll take you eternities to get rid of me,' she adds sadly, which makes >>> me
jealous, I want her to say I'll never get rid of her - I want to be chased >>> till eternity till I catch her." -Jack Kerouac
Excellent Kerouac quote ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Check out download of the day (& for John Allen Daniel II, Brian Mallard, >>> Jack Snipe & Deby Love-Payne to study for the upcoming show Dec. 19th),
"Angel of Esquiline Hill / Will Dockery & The Shadowville All-Stars
https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery/song/22149226-angel-esquiline-hill--will-dockery?0
:D
nobody wants
Yet here you were, whining away.
;)
Will Dockery wrote:
Will Dockery - Angel Of Esquiline Hill [first draft]:
https://soundcloud.com/jacksnipe05/willdockeryangelofesquilinehillfirstdraft
"Words and Music by Will Dockery, Robert Wright and Jack Snipe. First draft; lead guitar and bck vocals need a little tweaking; otherwise I think I've done a pretty decent job on the production." -Jack Snipe
Again, more of my poetry based on my life, filtered through memory and
dream... transformed into Art.
Those who understand, will... those who do not, are not my problem.
Most seem to get it, Doc....
----------------------------------------------------------
More notations in my Drafts file.
Will Dockery wrote:
Trace wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
I'm on Eternal-September tonight, checking of the broken thread phenomenon >>>> again, so, another test post on this on to see if it will stay on thread or
break the thread...
Test, test...
Appears to be a broken thread.
Yes, checking in to see if it repaired itself by now.
Does not look like it....
Will Dockery wrote:
Yes, checking in to see if it repaired itself by now.
Add this...
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st3dbWFKpB8
***
Will Dockery wrote:
Yes, checking in to see if it repaired itself by now.
Add this...
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st3dbWFKpB8
***
Will Dockery wrote:
Yes, checking in to see if it repaired itself by now.
Add this...
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st3dbWFKpB8
***
Will Dockery wrote:
Will Dockery - Angel Of Esquiline Hill [first draft]:
https://soundcloud.com/jacksnipe05/willdockeryangelofesquilinehillfirstdraft
"Words and Music by Will Dockery, Robert Wright and Jack Snipe. First draft; lead guitar and bck vocals need a little tweaking; otherwise I think I've done a pretty decent job on the production." -Jack Snipe
Again, more of my poetry based on my life, filtered through memory and
dream... transformed into Art.
Those who understand, will... those who do not, are not my problem.
Most seem to get it, Doc....
----------------------------------------------------------
More notations in my Drafts file.
Will Dockery wrote:
Trace wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
I'm on Eternal-September tonight, checking of the broken thread phenomenon >>>> again, so, another test post on this on to see if it will stay on thread or
break the thread...
Test, test...
Appears to be a broken thread.
Yes, checking in to see if it repaired itself by now.
Does not look like it....
Angel of Esquiline Hill / Will Dockery (Words), Robert Wright and Jack Snipe (Music):
https://youtu.be/st3dbWFKpB8
Will Dockery wrote:
Angel of Esquiline Hill / Will Dockery (Words), Robert Wright and Jack Snipe (Music):
https://youtu.be/st3dbWFKpB8
Excellent fave from years gone by....
Zod wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
Angel of Esquiline Hill / Will Dockery (Words), Robert Wright and Jack Snipe (Music):
https://youtu.be/st3dbWFKpB8
Excellent fave from years gone by....
Thanks again for listening and commenting.
Angel of Esquiline Hill / Will Dockery (Words), Robert Wright and Jack Snipe (Music):
https://youtu.be/st3dbWFKpB8
Will Dockery wrote:
Angel of Esquiline Hill / Will Dockery (Words), Robert Wright and Jack Snipe (Music):
https://youtu.be/st3dbWFKpB8
Another listen sitting on the river bank, a fave....
Will Dockery wrote:
Will Dockery - Angel Of Esquiline Hill [first draft]:
https://soundcloud.com/jacksnipe05/willdockeryangelofesquilinehillfirstdraft
"Words and Music by Will Dockery, Robert Wright and Jack Snipe. First draft; lead guitar and bck vocals need a little tweaking; otherwise I think I've done a pretty decent job on the production." -Jack Snipe
Again, more of my poetry based on my life, filtered through memory and
dream... transformed into Art.
Those who understand, will... those who do not, are not my problem.
Most seem to get it, Doc....
Will Dockery wrote:
Will Dockery - Angel Of Esquiline Hill [first draft]:
https://soundcloud.com/jacksnipe05/willdockeryangelofesquilinehillfirstdraft
"Words and Music by Will Dockery, Robert Wright and Jack Snipe. First draft; lead guitar and bck vocals need a little tweaking; otherwise I think I've done a pretty decent job on the production." -Jack Snipe
Again, more of my poetry based on my life, filtered through memory and
dream... transformed into Art.
Those who understand, will... those who do not, are not my problem.
Most seem to get it, Doc....
----------------------------------------------------------
More notations in my Drafts file.
Will Dockery wrote:
Will Dockery - Angel Of Esquiline Hill [first draft]:
https://soundcloud.com/jacksnipe05/willdockeryangelofesquilinehillfirstdraft
"Words and Music by Will Dockery, Robert Wright and Jack Snipe. First draft; lead guitar and bck vocals need a little tweaking; otherwise I think I've done a pretty decent job on the production." -Jack Snipe
Again, more of my poetry based on my life, filtered through memory and
dream... transformed into Art.
Those who understand, will... those who do not, are not my problem.
Most seem to get it, Doc....
----------------------------------------------------------
More notations in my Drafts file.
Will Dockery wrote:
Angel of Esquiline Hill / Will Dockery (Words), Robert Wright and Jack Snipe (Music):
https://youtu.be/st3dbWFKpB8
Excellent fave from years gone by....
Will Dockery wrote:
Zod wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
Angel of Esquiline Hill / Will Dockery (Words), Robert Wright and Jack Snipe (Music):
https://youtu.be/st3dbWFKpB8
Excellent fave from years gone by....
Thanks again for listening and commenting.
Good photo as well.... ha ha.
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe
Will Dockery wrote:
Yes, checking in to see if it repaired itself by now.
Add this...
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st3dbWFKpB8
***
.
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st3dbWFKpB8
***
Will Dockery wrote:
Michael Pendragon wrote:
your poem was "inspired," at least in part,
from "Suzanne Takes You Down." In fact, I'd venture to guess that the >>>>> vast majority of your poems are derived from rock or folkie songs (like >>>>> that "Hotel California" clone)
Which you were also mistaken about, and I explained to you nearly endlessly.
I'm just not well-versed enough in late 60s/early 70s music to pick up on >>>>> them all.
Seriously, nothing like that is there, although I do love Leonard Cohen's >>>> poetry, this is working in a very different area than "Suzanne"... ask >>>> somebody who would actually know, like George Dance.
https://youtu.be/st3dbWFKpB8
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe.
Again, I love the Leonard Cohen poetry, but this poem is operating on a >>>> whole other level, one personal to me and my world, as is "Esquiline Hill" >>>> unique to me and the setting for my poetry, Shadowville.
Retro Guy has hit his stride with Nova BBS.
Will Dockery wrote:
.
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st3dbWFKpB8
***
Good day to you Doc...!
Will Dockery wrote:
.
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st3dbWFKpB8
***
Good day to you Doc...!
.
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st3dbWFKpB8
Will Dockery wrote:
.
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st3dbWFKpB8
always a good listen,...
Zod wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
Michael Pendragon wrote:
your poem was "inspired," at least in part,
from "Suzanne Takes You Down." In fact, I'd venture to guess that the >>>>>> vast majority of your poems are derived from rock or folkie songs (like >>>>>> that "Hotel California" clone)
Which you were also mistaken about, and I explained to you nearly endlessly.
I'm just not well-versed enough in late 60s/early 70s music to pick up on
them all.
Seriously, nothing like that is there, although I do love Leonard Cohen's >>>>> poetry, this is working in a very different area than "Suzanne"... ask >>>>> somebody who would actually know, like George Dance.
https://youtu.be/st3dbWFKpB8
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe.
Again, I love the Leonard Cohen poetry, but this poem is operating on a >>>>> whole other level, one personal to me and my world, as is "Esquiline Hill"
unique to me and the setting for my poetry, Shadowville.
Retro Guy has hit his stride with Nova BBS.
Still a few glitches but getting better finally.
https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2022/06/apple-montage.html
Apple Montage
Sneaking around
with Cousin Jenny,
smoking menthol
beyond the sheds.
Late summer vacation 1973
in the backwoods of Tennessee.
To the right
behind the barn
were apple trees.
There were several
of those trees
and other trees
behind them
beyond a field
and behind them, other trees.
Later, I stood near
as a crowd
watched Pops and my Uncle
cooking apple butter;
stirring the brown gunk,
boiling in a huge black kettle.
I saw my father
secretly pass
a wine bottle
to my Uncle Clarence.
I went from
breathing cold mist
out back behind the barn,
to breathing
the hot misty steam.
The air smelled of apple fumes
and strong booze.
-Will Dockery
Ugh, another broken thread...!
Fixed...
https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2022/06/apple-montage.html
General-Zod wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
Yes, checking in to see if it repaired itself by now.
Add this...
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st3dbWFKpB8
***
Thanks, Zod.
Will Dockery wrote:
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st3dbWFKpB8
Cool... cool...
Will Dockery wrote:
Angel of Esquiline Hill
Poem by Will Dockery
Music by Rob Wright and Jack Snipe
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=st3dbWFKpB8
***
General-Zod wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
Will Dockery - Angel Of Esquiline Hill [first draft]:
https://soundcloud.com/jacksnipe05/willdockeryangelofesquilinehillfirstdraft
"Words and Music by Will Dockery, Robert Wright and Jack Snipe. First draft; lead guitar and bck vocals need a little tweaking; otherwise I think I've done a pretty decent job on the production." -Jack Snipe
Again, more of my poetry based on my life, filtered through memory and
dream... transformed into Art.
Those who understand, will... those who do not, are not my problem.
Most seem to get it, Doc....
Those who matter, at least.
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More notations in my Drafts file.
W.Dockery wrote:
General-Zod wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
Will Dockery - Angel Of Esquiline Hill [first draft]:
https://soundcloud.com/jacksnipe05/willdockeryangelofesquilinehillfirstdraft
"Words and Music by Will Dockery, Robert Wright and Jack Snipe. First draft; lead guitar and bck vocals need a little tweaking; otherwise I think I've done a pretty decent job on the production." -Jack Snipe
Again, more of my poetry based on my life, filtered through memory and >>>> dream... transformed into Art.
Those who understand, will... those who do not, are not my problem.
Most seem to get it, Doc....
Those who matter, at least.
----------------------------------------------------------
More notations in my Drafts file.
Good work...
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