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    From Paul Vicious@21:1/5 to david...@gmail.com on Sat Jun 5 16:14:51 2021
    On Wednesday, April 14, 2021 at 11:35:48 PM UTC-4, david...@gmail.com wrote:
    three chords
    embody the cringe
    and elation of us
    loving music

    Simple yet great...

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  • From George J. Dance@21:1/5 to david...@gmail.com on Sun Jun 6 09:58:46 2021
    On Wednesday, April 14, 2021 at 11:35:48 PM UTC-4, david...@gmail.com wrote:
    three chords
    embody the cringe
    and elation of us
    loving music

    Have you considered formatting this to look more like a standard haiku?

    three chords embody
    the cringe and relation of
    us loving music

    I'd be interested in your thoughts.

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  • From George J. Dance@21:1/5 to david...@gmail.com on Sun Jun 6 09:56:13 2021
    On Wednesday, April 14, 2021 at 11:35:48 PM UTC-4, david...@gmail.com wrote:
    three chords
    embody the cringe
    and elation of us
    loving music

    Is this 3-chord r&b /r&r?

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  • From Terry Zod@21:1/5 to George J. Dance on Mon Jun 7 16:49:36 2021
    On Sunday, June 6, 2021 at 12:58:47 PM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
    On Wednesday, April 14, 2021 at 11:35:48 PM UTC-4, david...@gmail.com wrote:
    three chords
    embody the cringe
    and elation of us
    loving music
    Have you considered formatting this to look more like a standard haiku?

    three chords embody
    the cringe and relation of
    us loving music

    I'd be interested in your thoughts.

    Can we convince David to join us on aapc...?

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  • From George J. Dance@21:1/5 to tzod...@gmail.com on Thu Jul 1 03:25:17 2021
    On Monday, June 7, 2021 at 7:49:37 PM UTC-4, tzod...@gmail.com wrote:
    On Sunday, June 6, 2021 at 12:58:47 PM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
    On Wednesday, April 14, 2021 at 11:35:48 PM UTC-4, david...@gmail.com wrote:
    three chords
    embody the cringe
    and elation of us
    loving music
    Have you considered formatting this to look more like a standard haiku?

    three chords embody
    the cringe and relation of
    us loving music

    I'd be interested in your thoughts.
    Can we convince David to join us on aapc...?

    I wouldn't push anyone to go there right now. Things are relatively calm there, but I've got a feeling we're in the eye of the hurricane. OTOH, I've noticed about 4 new names posting poems here on rap, and that's a good thing. I'll keep putting PPB's
    offerings on here, and I see Will's doing the same. We may get this group revived!

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  • From Paul Vicious@21:1/5 to George J. Dance on Fri Jul 9 14:35:25 2021
    On Thursday, July 1, 2021 at 6:25:18 AM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
    On Monday, June 7, 2021 at 7:49:37 PM UTC-4, tzod...@gmail.com wrote:
    On Sunday, June 6, 2021 at 12:58:47 PM UTC-4, George J. Dance wrote:
    On Wednesday, April 14, 2021 at 11:35:48 PM UTC-4, david...@gmail.com wrote:
    three chords
    embody the cringe
    and elation of us
    loving music
    Have you considered formatting this to look more like a standard haiku?

    three chords embody
    the cringe and relation of
    us loving music

    I'd be interested in your thoughts.
    Can we convince David to join us on aapc...?
    I wouldn't push anyone to go there right now. Things are relatively calm there, but I've got a feeling we're in the eye of the hurricane. OTOH, I've noticed about 4 new names posting poems here on rap, and that's a good thing. I'll keep putting PPB's
    offerings on here, and I see Will's doing the same. We may get this group revived!

    Agreed I reckon.........

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