December 15, 2018 A. Tina Hall wrote:
[...]
So, you've decided to join me in thinking out loud in this forum?
Your immediate question is how to fill in 15 formative years in the
lives of the kids...I suppose it's not suitable to summarize in one paragraph. Have you blocked out how long that section does need to
be? What needs to happen that will be referenced anywhere else in
the story?
From your description of the "magic" that rules these people's lives,
it would appear that it's best understood as a force of nature that
has guided their evolution, and thus their very nature, since time immemorial.
It's fate, if you like.
Like it or not, they must accept that the patient workings of magic
will eventually wear down whatever efforts they make to oppose it, and
that they therefore must conduct themselves with the understanding
that anything they achieve means anything only in the context of the
magical milieu's rules--in the same way that human work and literature
must always revolve around the fact of death.
What happens if you decide that all the eventualities they're trying
to avoid--the wars and such--not only do happen, but happen all the
time? Can you write that scene? Does that spoil the whole story, or
does it liberate it? If you build a story around someone's effort to
oppose forces of fate that will not be defeated in the end, that's
called tragedy.
On 18.12.18, Brian Pickrell <bobthrollop # gmail> wrote:
December 15, 2018 A. Tina Hall wrote:
[...]
So, you've decided to join me in thinking out loud in this forum?
Yup. :)
Your immediate question is how to fill in 15 formative years in the
lives of the kids...
On December 18, 2018 A. Tina Hall wrote:
On 18.12.18, Brian Pickrell <bobthrollop # gmail> wrote:
[...]
So, you've decided to join me in thinking out loud in this forum?
Yup. :)
Your immediate question is how to fill in 15 formative years in the
lives of the kids...
I'm still not quite clear on what the meaning of "stuck" is for
you...in other words, what would have to happen before you can call
it done and be happy with it?
Is it that you've committed yourself to three books and you've only
completed two of them? I think you're saying there's a 15 year
chronological gap between the end of Book 2 and the next planned
scene in Book 3, and you don't feel you can just pick up Book 3 at
that point, is that it?
Do you feel that the rest of the work is useless without completing
Book 3, or are you just continuing to write because you like doing
it? (In which case, not doing it for 10 years tends to indicate that
it's not such a pleasure after all...)
On 19.12.18, Brian P. <bobthrollop@gmail.com> wrote:
On December 18, 2018 A. Tina Hall wrote:
On 18.12.18, Brian Pickrell <bobthrollop # gmail> wrote:
[...]
So, you've decided to join me in thinking out loud in this forum?
Yup. :)
Your immediate question is how to fill in 15 formative years in the
lives of the kids...
I'm still not quite clear on what the meaning of "stuck" is for
you...in other words, what would have to happen before you can call
it done and be happy with it?
The book being finished, at least.
Mind, I'd not mind adding to the story, but once I got 3 books with
around 200k words each (can't have the third be less, would feel wrong)
and an end I see as end, I call it, well, "that's the end of the
trilogy".
On 12/19/18 7:07 AM, A. Tina Hall wrote:
On 19.12.18, Brian P. <bobthrollop@gmail.com> wrote:
I'm still not quite clear on what the meaning of "stuck" is for
you...in other words, what would have to happen before you can call
it done and be happy with it?
The book being finished, at least.
Mind, I'd not mind adding to the story, but once I got 3 books with
around 200k words each (can't have the third be less, would feel
wrong) and an end I see as end, I call it, well, "that's the end of
the trilogy".
I think that a book's length is its length. I believe that in two of
my trilogies the third book was shorter than either of its
predecessors. Try not to get chained to the word count.
That said, if both of the predecessors were 200k (!), readers would
probably expect at least a full-size novel (100k) to finish it off.
On 21.12.18, Sea Wasp (Ryk E. Spoor) <seawasp@sgeinc.invalid.com> wrote:
On 12/19/18 7:07 AM, A. Tina Hall wrote:
On 19.12.18, Brian P. <bobthrollop@gmail.com> wrote:
I'm still not quite clear on what the meaning of "stuck" is for
you...in other words, what would have to happen before you can call
it done and be happy with it?
The book being finished, at least.
Mind, I'd not mind adding to the story, but once I got 3 books with
around 200k words each (can't have the third be less, would feel
wrong) and an end I see as end, I call it, well, "that's the end of
the trilogy".
I think that a book's length is its length. I believe that in two of
my trilogies the third book was shorter than either of its
predecessors. Try not to get chained to the word count.
Sounds reasonable to suggest that. It's just that I'd feel bugged if it
were a bigger difference than, say, 30% less.
On 12/22/18 6:21 AM, A. Tina Hall wrote:
On 21.12.18, Sea Wasp (Ryk E. Spoor) <seawasp@sgeinc.invalid.com>
On 12/19/18 7:07 AM, A. Tina Hall wrote:
Mind, I'd not mind adding to the story, but once I got 3 books
with around 200k words each (can't have the third be less, would
feel wrong) and an end I see as end, I call it, well, "that's the
end of the trilogy".
I think that a book's length is its length. I believe that in two
of my trilogies the third book was shorter than either of its
predecessors. Try not to get chained to the word count.
Sounds reasonable to suggest that. It's just that I'd feel bugged if
it were a bigger difference than, say, 30% less.
I can understand that.
Is there a secondary or not-quite-protagonist character who has
enough importance to the plot that THEIR story could be added into
the mix? That's how I got my superhero novel _Legend_ to a reasonable
novel length; a character who was important but had been sidelined
got her own chapters, and that brought the length well up.
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