• Bookworm press release, please review and translate.

    From Donald Norwood@21:1/5 to debian-publicity on Thu Jun 8 20:00:02 2023
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    <pre class="moz-signature" cols="-1">Dearest All,

    We are 90% complete on our press announcement for the upcoming release of "bookworm" this Saturday, June 10, 2023.

    We have no foreseeable changes, though we may include additional release note information as it becomes available, however that is unlikely.

    We would very much appreciate reviews and translations for the work which is available here:

    <a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://salsa.debian.org/publicity-team/announcements/-/blob/master/en/drafts/">https://salsa.debian.org/publicity-team/announcements/-/blob/master/en/drafts/</a>
    bookworm-release.wml

    For those new to the process the How To Contribute[1] guide can be helpful, most
    of the workflow and information is similar.

    [1]<a class="moz-txt-link-freetext" href="https://wiki.debian.org/ProjectNews/HowToContribute">https://wiki.debian.org/ProjectNews/HowToContribute</a>

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    Be well,

    -Donald

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  • From Justin B Rye@21:1/5 to Donald Norwood on Thu Jun 8 20:30:01 2023
    Donald Norwood wrote:
    We would very much appreciate reviews and translations for the work which is available here:

    A couple of lines I'm not sure about:

    <p>Debian 12 <q>bookworm</q> ships with several desktop applications and
    environments. Amongst others it includes the desktop environments:
    </p>

    "Several desktop applications"? I've got several desktop applications
    open right now. Is it trying to say something like "several desktop environments each providing a full suite of applications"?

    Also:

    <p>This release contains over <b>11,089</b> new packages for a total count of <b>64,419</b>
    packages, along with a significant reduction of over <b>6,296</b> packages which
    were marked as <q>obsolete</q> and removed. <b>43,254</b> packages were updated in
    this release.

    It contains packages along with a reduction? I'd suggest:

    <p>This release contains over <b>11,089</b> new packages for a total count of <b>64,419</b>
    packages, while over <b>6,296</b> packages have been removed as obsolete. <b>43,254</b>
    packages were updated in this release.

    --
    JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
    sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package

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  • From Donald Norwood@21:1/5 to Justin B Rye on Thu Jun 8 21:10:01 2023
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