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  • Please review and translate: "DebConf22 starts today in Prizren" blog p

    From Laura Arjona Reina@21:1/5 to All on Sat Jul 16 20:40:01 2022
    Dear all,

    We plan to publish tomorrow Sunday early morning (around 7:00 UTC) a blog post about DebConf22 starting.
    We would very much appreciate reviews and translations.

    The file is available here:

    https://salsa.debian.org/publicity-team/bits/-/blob/master/content/2022/debconf22-starts.md

    And you can see how it looks like at:

    https://bits.debian.org/drafts/debconf22-starts.html

    Thank you very much!

    Kind regards,
    --
    Laura Arjona Reina
    https://wiki.debian.org/LauraArjona

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  • From Thomas Lange@21:1/5 to All on Sat Jul 16 21:30:01 2022
    Hi Laura,

    IMO the paragraph about safe and welcome environment is too
    long because the link to the CoC includes most information. Also
    the Anti-Harassment team was renamed to Community team.

    --
    best regards from Kosovo Thomas

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  • From Znoteer@21:1/5 to Laura Arjona Reina on Sat Jul 16 21:30:01 2022
    On Sat, Jul 16, 2022 at 08:30:56PM +0200, Laura Arjona Reina wrote:
    Dear all,

    We plan to publish tomorrow Sunday early morning (around 7:00 UTC) a blog post about DebConf22 starting.
    We would very much appreciate reviews and translations.


    At least in the variety of English I speak, to participate and to work are followed by different prepositions.

    So in the 2nd sentence, instead of "...to participate and work in a conference exclusively run by volunteers." I would suggest to see "...to participate in and to work at a conference exclusively run by volunteers."

    I have also inserted the "to" that marks "work" as an infinitive.

    That is my opinion, at any rate :)

    Cheers,

    --
    Znoteer
    znoteer@mailbox.org

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  • From Laura Arjona Reina@21:1/5 to All on Sat Jul 16 21:40:01 2022
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