Seguem algumas sugestões da revisão.

Abraços,
Thiago Pezzo (Tico)

November 24, 2022 7:30 PM, "Paulo Henrique de Lima Santana" <phls@debian.org> wrote:

Olá,

Segue em anexo o arquivo para revisão.

Abraços,

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Paulo Henrique de Lima Santana (phls)
Belo Horizonte - Brasil
Debian Developer
Associado do Instituto para Conservação de Tecnologias Livres
Site: http://phls.com.br
GPG ID: 0443C450

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