Seguem algumas sugestões de revisão.
Abraços,
Thiago Pezzo (Tico)
December 2, 2022 7:17 PM, "Paulo Henrique de Lima Santana" <
phls@debian.org> wrote:
Olá,
Segue em anexo o arquivo para revisão.
É uma tradução nova.
Abraços,
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Paulo Henrique de Lima Santana (phls)
Belo Horizonte - Brasil
Debian Developer
Site: http://phls.com.br
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