Aí vão algumas sugestões de revisão.
Abraços,
Thiago Pezzo (Tico)
December 3, 2022 9:13 AM, "Paulo Henrique de Lima Santana" <
phls@debian.org> wrote:
Olá,
Segue em anexo o arquivo para revisão.
É uma tradução nova.
Abraços,
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Debian Developer
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