On 11/10/2020 2:10 p.m., Denis Mosko : All wrote:
Lovely 3 bedroom apartment located in City, tourist area
near River, area SUPERMARKET. All infrastructure and
amenities are close by. Total covered area of flat is 20,
fully renovated. Apartment features bedroom, living room
with open-plan kitchen, bathroom and a shower, balcony,
River view. Apartment is furnished and washing machine is
installed throughout. Covered parking.
Is it ok?
The most glaring problem would be this sentence:
"Apartment is furnished and washing machine is
installed throughout."
I'd make it:
"Apartment is fully furnished, including an in-suite washing machine."
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